That time i got reincarnated with some cheats

That time i got reincarnated with some cheats

You should know how it goes, I died, met a ROB, got some wishes, before getting reincarnated in a world of my choosing.

Let’s get started shall we?
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In case you didn’t realise, this is a Tensura Slime fanfic.

I don’t consider myself a veteran writer, so if you have any feedback I would be glad to read them. Don’t expect a flawless plot line.
I don’t mind you guys making a bad review but at least let me know what I did wrong.

I own nothing except my own characters. The cover pic is something I found off google, if you want me to take it down just drop a comment.

The story is hilarious.

I would give the story a five star, but I have been starting to get bored towards the end of the latest chapters.

Nothing against the author, but I like when something doesn’t have the same/ too similar plot points as the original story. The MC doesn’t really think ahead to what he remembers about the story to solve things before they become a bigger problem. For example, solving the orc disaster by killing the orc lord before it even got to the ogre town or evolved.

While it wasn’t a big problem in the end and quite possibly been intentionally kept in there, I feel that he should rely more on his knowledge of what will come to his advantage, rather than just waiting before getting himself in a similar situation to the original Rimuru. He might want to honor Satoru, but he could do things more efficiently.

It not that big of a deal and often creates funny situations, but he should use his head a little more and have some more serious planning for the future. Just enough so it doesn’t take away from the comedic aspect and provides a bit to the development of the story.

Whatever, idk what to say anymore, first time writing a review so.

TL;DR: Good story, good humor, could use a bit more serious planning or thought for what the MC could do to eliminate bad situations from coming up in the future. (None have really happened so far)